To write a nice essay

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To write a nice essay, what should we do? First, research is a crucial part to write an essay. It's difficult to find information in English, but research supports writer's opinion. We can strengthen an essay topic with research. Secondly, outlining can help plan an essay. Before we write an essay, we should think of the structure of an essay. It helps to write an essay more clearly. After writing an essay, we have to polish it. Peer edits each other and omit extra part. These things I mentioned in this blog are important. I'm going to write 1 paragraph of the essay from now. Bye~~~~~~~~~~~~:)